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    dots Submission Name: Beyonddots
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    Author: Toadslayer
    ASL Info:    35/Female/Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.08 - 32/38/15
    Words: 11
    Class/Type: Haiku/Passion
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    Bytes: 84



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    dotsBeyonddots
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    When things seem broken.
    Torn beyond recognition.
    Stop and look again.




    Submitted on 2015-11-16 13:50:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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