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    dots Submission Name: Dear gamer .....dots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.15 - 51/165/170
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsDear gamer .....dots
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    Ranting and raging
    Pushing away.
    Wrapped up in yourself
    In love with the game.

    Strategy combined
    with virtual heros
    Plotting and planning
    stroking your ego.

    Filling your days with
    Nothing to lose
    But in reality
    you will
    choose.

    I have waited
    played along
    time is up
    now I'm gone.

    This life is precious
    And nothing to waste
    I can not sit around
    And play a game.

    Waiting for you
    to open your eyes
    Stop living like
    This is eternity.
    This is life!















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      Please leave, you give poetry a very bad name.
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