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DE Ja Vue

Author: Chelebel
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DE Ja Vue

I somehow knew
I would loose you.
I dreamt of this.
De ja vue.

Then I woke up

I go to bed

Today my
De ja vue
Came true.

I go to bed

I had you and never
I lost you and somehow

But you knew.
You somehow knew
You hurt my heart
Saw my eyes
Heard my voice
Felt my cry.

Submitted on 2015-11-19 00:30:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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