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    dots Submission Name: DE Ja Vue dots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/173
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsDE Ja Vue dots
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    I somehow knew
    I would loose you.
    I dreamt of this.
    De ja vue.

    Then I woke up
    Crying.

    I go to bed
    Crying.

    Today my
    De ja vue
    Came true.

    I go to bed
    Crying.

    I had you and never
    Knew.
    I lost you and somehow
    Knew.

    But you knew.
    You somehow knew
    You hurt my heart
    Saw my eyes
    Heard my voice
    Felt my cry.








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