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    dots Submission Name: This Mandots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 192
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThis Mandots
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    He is everything to all of us

    The son,
    Heart beating in reflection of life granted
    His eyes and mouth sculpted to the art of being
    He is

    The brother,
    Keeping
    Forgiving
    They all laugh and enjoy drinks at night
    At one another, never and yet always perfect
    Flawed by the cuts of lifes rough edges
    Bonded by experiences like the coalescence of metals heated by fire

    The Lover
    Hot breath, hot head, hot hands

    The father once,
    Afraid
    To be the man

    A husband
    Kept,
    Forgiven,
    Joined together by more than just the act of love
    Heaven descended,
    Cherishing
    Giver of gifts
    Protecting and providing
    Joined by the spiritual essence of unity

    A father,
    At last
    Experience granting wisdom
    Again
    The confidence to be a man
    For a man
    The image of a man for his son
    Day after day becoming more like the image of His Father and Lord
    So his children will never have to fear
    Themselves

    He is everything to all of us
    The hammer to the nail
    The sun to the sky
    The water to the earth
    Ours




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      One man can be nothing to some but everything to others. It's love that decides with it will be. A lovely tribute poem Jaz.
    | Posted on 2015-12-16 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
      One man can be nothing to some but everything to others. It's love that decides with it will be. A lovely tribute poem Jaz.
    | Posted on 2015-12-16 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
      A cousin, a friend, an uncle, a nephew, a teacher, a student, a grandfather-uncle, a dentist, a bus driver, a coach, a boss, a subordinate, a pastor, a delivery person.... :-))
    | Posted on 2015-12-10 00:00:00 | by CrypticBard | [ Reply to This ]


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