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    dots Submission Name: Far Away from Sintondots
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    Author: SavedDragon
    Elite Ratio:    3.61 - 303/258/84
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsFar Away from Sintondots
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    Fade, fade, fade away
    Into a memory
    Say I love you, you love me
    Then turn around, abandon me

    Hold my hand, hold me
    Drive me out of town
    Then say I don't make you happy
    Say I bring you down

    Cowboy hat and cowgirl boots
    Two-step our way to bliss
    Wrangler plaid and daisy dukes
    Steal me away with your kiss

    Laughs shared with booze
    Youthful innocence never dies
    Sunsets and shooting stars
    Staring at night skies

    Lie, lie, lie to me
    Make yourself believe in something
    You want a house, you want a ranch
    You just want everything

    All of the hopes, all of the dreams
    Dissipate in front of me
    Just drive away, far, far away
    And in my rear view, Sinton




    Submitted on 2015-12-01 14:41:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    | Posted on 2017-05-09 00:00:00 | by SavedDragon | [ Reply to This ]
      I can almost hear this like an Avett Brothers song in my head. I enjoyed the read.
    | Posted on 2015-12-08 00:00:00 | by JanePlane | [ Reply to This ]


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