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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/173
    Words: 71
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    I dreamt of you again.

    I saw you standing there

    just looking at me.

    You faded in

    you faded out.

    I thought to myself

    My God, you are a ghost.

    Come back to me tonight.

    I want to hear your laugh

    One more time.

    I dreamt of you again.












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