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    dots Submission Name: A ghost dots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/173
    Words: 120
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    dotsA ghost dots
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    A ghost of the mind
    Or a ghost of the Devine?
    A ghost of the past
    for sure to last.


    I love you
    Angelo
    Mei.



    I will forever miss you in my reality
    But just you wait One day...



    You won't have to visit me in my dreams anymore.



    I know you thought what will the world do without you??


    I think the same things.........

    Because one thing is for sure
    This party is quite and lonesome
    You left so quietly
    And abruptly.






















    Submitted on 2015-12-01 17:39:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      What page of your dory diary is that from?
    | Posted on 2015-12-02 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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