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    dots Submission Name: A ghost dots

    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.21 - 53/166/172
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsA ghost dots

    A ghost of the mind
    Or a ghost of the Devine?
    A ghost of the past
    for sure to last.

    I love you

    I will forever miss you in my reality
    But just you wait One day...

    You won't have to visit me in my dreams anymore.

    I know you thought what will the world do without you??

    I think the same things.........

    Because one thing is for sure
    This party is quite and lonesome
    You left so quietly
    And abruptly.

    Submitted on 2015-12-01 17:39:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      What page of your dory diary is that from?
    | Posted on 2015-12-02 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]

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