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    dots Submission Name: PSSST!!!dots
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    Author: hyproglo
    Elite Ratio:    4 - 180/258/153
    Words: 193
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsPSSST!!!dots
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    Being so warm can be a curse
    A thing to throw away on a summer day

    Who seeks warmth when it requires throwing away
    everything you've lived for

    "Make mine shaken AND stirred"

    Keep that hole in your bucket
    Release that spool of thread

    Where did that nonsense go
    that was spinning in your head

    End of an end of nothing that began
    An expected love that unexpectedly

    Ends.

    Were any doors apparent when you were shut out?

    Was it just a sound?

    A lilac blossoming in a season
    that was too pure for you

    Where did heaven go, as the stars have fallen numerous times

    Let us cascade velvet whispers
    in rusted tones

    And if there was more
    Then there was where we left it.

    Hanging around for all to see
    Never walking a wall nor travelling far

    The only way out was never in the blood

    Never talking too tall nor leaving a scar
    Chance is abound for all to see


    In one I have you
    In the other lies me





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