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    dots Submission Name: Warmth whole heartedly dots

    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.19 - 53/167/177
    Words: 270
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsWarmth whole heartedly dots

    Expectations control the limits
    Reaching out to destroy the moment.

    Remove the want and the need
    That feed the mind and sends it

    Let the now control the outcome
    Allow the love to take ahold.
    Pushing together and colliding
    The force that unites the hearts
    And hold on tight.

    Reverse psychology has no stance
    When Devine intervention Has its plans.

    Be sincere , be diligent
    Allow your heart to be congruent.
    Move towards the light and not away
    Because all the doors seem to sway
    In and out of light and dark
    Each and every day.

    No clues were missed
    In the shadows.
    Only wondering if
    The shades and hues
    of the grey
    Moved me towards
    the light of day.

    True love can feel its match.
    It knows its energy
    It feels its Ora
    It needs its light.
    It wants its warmth.

    It seeks its security
    In knowing that
    Alcohol could be removed
    From everyday matters.

    It needs to know that
    It will sit and pray
    Give thanks for life
    Give thanks to grey.
    Humble yourself and
    Open that bucket
    Your heart is worth
    All the abundant.

    The sounds that cry out
    Are only temporary
    The heart knows its place
    Sometimes the mind
    Takes patience.

    Cascading hearts down distressed roads
    Push towards turbulence and pot holes.

    Fear keeps these doors from opening.

    " I never knew a door to shut without another opening."

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