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    Author: Pollens
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    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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                        ___________________




                        The window IS inside
                        &- outside



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    Forever
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    A briefly held thought




























    Inquisitive
    i lose myself in my head





















                                       (time turns over)





































    Who's to say..........................................................
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    Where i am.............................................................
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                                                                When I'm sleeping








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