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    Author: Pollens
    Elite Ratio:    1.04 - 4/27/34
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    like the molecule of water
    roaring at being the wave
    clearly the sound traveled along the track
                        and it carried me away with it.



    I can tell you something of the spirit: to have been stopped
    at the one place for too long, to have shopped the same
    grocery store for twenty yrs









    Love IS















    Softness douses us.







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      So much for that flame.
    | Posted on 2015-12-09 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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