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    Author: Pollens
    Elite Ratio:    1.04 - 4/27/34
    Words: 16
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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                             Ground which had
                             accepted a fingerprint
                             Now swallows
                             a man.




    Submitted on 2015-12-08 03:04:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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