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    dots Submission Name: so fill us with good thingsdots
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    Author: CrypticBard
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    dotsso fill us with good thingsdots
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    there was a vacancy in a place
    where an abyss engulfed chastity
    a concept strange and quite suspect
    in a world were we value prospect;
    a rarity to sanely slumber at night

    and receive sagely uttered sentiment
    whose aid in these moonlit promises
    birth occupancy in vacillating crises
    perhaps a constancy redeems piety;
    another word that reveals this malady



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      Prospectuses problematics are infinite engulfing those who would stand for a cause. Yet true spiritualism is obvious to the initiated. Regardless of the pandemic of realism.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2015-12-10 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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