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    dots Submission Name: Who wandereddots

    Author: hyproglo
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    dotsWho wandereddots

    Thank you Lord for giving me these feet
    to tread upon

    "Keep that faith in me. I have got it in you."

    It's in the blood
    It is warm
    It's from where the sword
    is sheathed and drawn

    "What they wrote eons ago was just a first draft."

    Hell is not a kingdom, just a pawn.

    Were it to rise
    It'd be crushed by mortal man

    By a smile and a thought

    And the succulent sessions of nature
    Combined with every scent of glory and pain that I have bestowed upon you

    I'll not give up wonder or imagination
    Once or twice a week
    To kneel inside a building
    And worship alongside people
    who feel weak.

    There is no reckoning in such a moment
    Only silent ways to grow a new itch

    I need not be in a building to hear you!

    I am me dear Lord.
    I am always here.
    It's not that I don't listen
    I have always been near.

    I do sometimes wonder
    whether it was not me
    but you
    who wandered so far away

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      This kind of hit me. We left our church when people began to comment on our children. One of whom is autistic, and found it necessary to leave when the organ played, and the other who suffered from a bipolar disorder. Neither child was bad or noisy during service, but members wanted my school- age children to sit in a room generally reserved for infants. This and they hypocritical nature of my daughters class, where it was fine to be mean to her as school, and nice at church, was pretty much the last straw.

    I no longer feel I have to go to church. I have a bible app and read frequently. I listen and support Air 1Radio, and I have made sure my children have a firm grasp on their faith. The God who sees and hears all knows what is in our hearts, and I think he might even call this church.
    | Posted on 2016-01-04 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]

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