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    dots Submission Name: The First Poemdots
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    Author: moaxcym
    ASL Info:    23/m/Pakistan
    Elite Ratio:    2.87 - 155/196/85
    Words: 34
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsThe First Poemdots
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    There are two poems carved on a public bench
    The older one is titled ‘Maria’, written in 1976.
    I was born in the ‘80s.
    How Wonderful! Poetry existed before my birth.




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