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    dots Submission Name: Two Wordsdots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.07 - 48/165/170
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    I'm sorry
    Two words
    hated most


    Two words
    Created anger
    Good Night


    Two words
    I really hate
    I'm Sorry


    Hard to say
    Even worse
    To forgive

    Apologies rely
    On allies

    Forgiveness relies
    On you

    Forgive me
    Runs behind
    I'm sorry

    Who gets first place
    They both lose.

    Trophy
    Ribbon
    Super glue?













    Submitted on 2015-12-15 00:18:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like the almost but pretty much symmetry in the structure of the piece. It gave grace to the honesty of emotion.
    | Posted on 2015-12-17 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      very bad, two cents, two words, get lost.
    | Posted on 2015-12-16 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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