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    Author: Pollens
    Elite Ratio:    1.04 - 4/27/34
    Words: 40
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    proud.
    Stupid
    as love
    lyrics,





















                                                                the river,
                                                                carving valleys
                                                                in me




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