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    dots Submission Name: pilgrim's regressdots
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    Author: CrypticBard
    Elite Ratio:    3.55 - 368/381/224
    Words: 32
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    so much emerges at daybreak
    much more than my locale

    or even in star-shine of night
    mere specks, unpolished coal;

    a darkness in shadow's light
    vainly seeking revealed perfection




    Submitted on 2015-12-15 05:14:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You really are a clever writer. This is the epitome of Pilgrims Regress, the summarized reference, allegorical, with intentions to reveal that light over darkness through the journey! I get excited about it.
    | Posted on 2015-12-16 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      Adequate inflection is a relevant relative to retaliatory regression but I digress.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2015-12-15 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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