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The birth of Music

Author: moaxcym
ASL Info:    23/m/Pakistan
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Class/Type: Poetry /Comedy
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The birth of Music

At the beginning God created a metaphor;
And then He said “Let there be light”
And thus Mozart was created.
Mozart felt too lonely.
Then God made a woman from Mozart’s piano
And named her Monica Bellucci
Bellucci made love to Mozart
And thus music was born.

Submitted on 2015-12-15 08:54:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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