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    dots Submission Name: The birth of Musicdots
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    Author: moaxcym
    ASL Info:    23/m/Pakistan
    Elite Ratio:    2.87 - 155/196/85
    Words: 48
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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    dotsThe birth of Musicdots
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    At the beginning God created a metaphor;
    And then He said “Let there be light”
    And thus Mozart was created.
    Mozart felt too lonely.
    Then God made a woman from Mozart’s piano
    And named her Monica Bellucci
    Bellucci made love to Mozart
    And thus music was born.




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