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    Author: Pollens
    Elite Ratio:    1.04 - 4/27/34
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    i know and you know you are aware of it
    a cage kept by two shutters with iron clasps for you to grip
    a place of sonic and summit
    and floral cliff for bees to zed-line
    for slumber and nothing [in particular] to swell where eco-systems will lay their lengthy shadow
    and birds will mill about or. simply wait__
    for you to send them__





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