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    dots Submission Name: first-world woesdots
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    Author: CrypticBard
    Elite Ratio:    3.55 - 368/381/224
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsfirst-world woesdots
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    Home. 
    Taken ill. 
    Staring down yet another 
    Unwelcome pill. 
    Once it was said 
    A canine's a bloke's 
    Best mate... 

    Home. 
    On the sick bed 
    Ignoring a mountain 
    Of unpaid bills 
    Got my trusty 
    Mobile & tablet--
    The world entire 

    Home;
    At my fingertips -
    Nothing like a touch screen 
    To scratch on that 
    Cerebral itch: 
    Friend or foe, 
    I am 4G's bitch.





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      Reminded me of my own discrimination against a "friend" whom would always fret over things such as Volleyball practice and the presents she'd receive for the holidays.
    I'm always reminding myself that pain comes in all shapes and sizes; doesn't rule out the fact it's there.

    But yes. My only friends always have been and may always be...dogs.
    | Posted on 2016-01-15 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]
      Layers. Home. The evolution it amusing, home with your furry companion to the companionable mate, technology. Who is not guilty? Even the littlest in my house are engaged, my ten moth old can't get enough of his YouTube. I simply don't know how to respond to that. When I take the phone away and his world crumbles. He saw a landline the other day and his eyes were astounded.

    Side note,
    Sorry I always comment with my own life. I relate to your words and it puts me so much in mind of things close to my heart.
    I am a sharer.
    | Posted on 2015-12-17 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]


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