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    dots Submission Name: 17th Decemberdots
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    Author: moaxcym
    ASL Info:    23/m/Pakistan
    Elite Ratio:    2.87 - 155/196/85
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dots17th Decemberdots
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    A poet looks at the world
    Like a man looks at a woman—
    Craving for words; lusting for curves.
    I’m an earthen man made up of fragile words
    And you are a subject of Neruda’s poetry:
    A flute’s song under a dying moon—
    You can tear open the monsoon clouds
    And steal the words for the parched earth
    Where the bones of earthen poets rest!




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