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    dots Submission Name: Without thoughtdots
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    Author: hyproglo
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    dotsWithout thoughtdots
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    "I'd never succeed if I didn't take moments to protect my heart from me."

    A genius in summertime

    Brothers and sisters, try and hope

    Let not blood on a vase discourage you because you cut yourself on a roses' thorn

    "What waits for you?

    Impatient?

    "Why do you wait?"

    Damnation is so scarce.
    That's why it's always on a screen
    Or on a mind
    Or some other place where it should not be

    Salvation is abundant
    Seldom devoured
    or on a mind
    Its always some place

    See it
    See it

    Everywhere

    "Let me burn just one moment of a valid dream into your mind...just one."

    if I could only pay the price for the paradise you feel you have lost

    In doing that, no music would stop
    No heartbeat forgot

    You'd never even know my name

    There would be nothing to go back to
    For you'd not know any side that was here
    or there
    or other

    side

    "Photographs appear without notice and disappear without thought."





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      Sadly we don't think positive and take things for granted, but the mistakes, the trials, the pains, we take every one of them to heart. We focus on being damned and never bother with the redemption staring us down. Thanks for the reminder to take off the blinders.
    | Posted on 2015-12-22 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]


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