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    dots Submission Name: 3 words hated Moredots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/176
    Words: 38
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    dots3 words hated Moredots
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    What holds clout
    Beyond a
    Shadow of a doubt?

    Hover your hand and swear
    Repeat after me
    I do declare

    Bless your heart

    Three words hated more







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