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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/173
    Words: 180
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       I know it may seem weird to read Mei but it is pronounced may. A man I will forever love who has passed on.


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    You steamed rolled me each time I visited every year.

    You missed me and I sang to you "you 're gonna miss me when I'm
    Gone."

    Fuck irony.

    I miss you now that you are gone.

    You should have sang that to me instead.
    You laughed and called me insane.
    My love remains.

    I miss you .
    I hate that I won't hear your voice anymore.
    You warned me. In Your subtle way.
    Downton abbey will never ever get my attention again.
    Although I know you already know the ending.
    I miss you so much Mei. I still cry every now and again.

    I have dreamt of you a lot though. I know you loved me too.
    It was the pure kind, the love that God intended to be shared.
    The kind of love between and old man and a young Jew. I know
    You are watching me, guiding me, telling me to be ..............still.














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      I love the simplicity of these words. They tell a clear and honest story that I'm sure many of us can relate to.

    If this is reality I hope you grow to cope and enjoy your life again.


    Well written.
    | Posted on 2016-01-11 00:00:00 | by Localfreak | [ Reply to This ]
      I agree.
    | Posted on 2015-12-18 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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