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    dots Submission Name: Mortem Sibi Conscivitdots
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    Author: Crestfallenman
    ASL Info:    24/M/CA
    Elite Ratio:    4.45 - 622/961/454
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsMortem Sibi Conscivitdots
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    The night sings smooth entrances,
    The road of exhibition so valiantly we stumble,
    Strophic diction strike pallets in ravish resemblance,
    Of the monsters that I fortify inside so humble...

    Flames singe beneath the surface,
    Yielding connections from a life once lost,
    Only the fervor from hell would quickly suffice,
    This listless blizzard of unsettled frost...

    Thy clouds gather,
    Bleeding an unsung moon...
    Arc the angelic catastrophe.
    Of self absorbing doom...

    Mortem Sibi Conscivit




    Submitted on 2015-12-18 00:29:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I am impressed to see both rhyme and Latin. Very thoughtful and colorfully dark poetic. The talent continues I see and if anything has evolved a smoothness from some of your earlier but still wonderfully creative word weaving.

    Personally, I have been coughing up nothing but dust of late creative wise.
    | Posted on 2015-12-20 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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