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    Author: Pollens
    Elite Ratio:    1.04 - 4/27/34
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    the moment when what has happened
    becomes enveloped in how it is










































                                                      Volitions

                             rise up in me
                             lose me












































                                  the night is black



    and i have put on
         a suit for this





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