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    Author: Pollens
    Elite Ratio:    1.04 - 4/27/34
    Words: 48
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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                                  and i wish you could
                                  have delayed



                        ° swung round for one vital pass
                        ° the navigator
                        ° commandeering the thermal
                        ° given depth & perspective.

                   Imperial, Blue,


                                            hung over the mountains







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