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    dots Submission Name: A Flock dots

    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsA Flock dots

    Birds are blessed with coats of invisibility
    Beautiful ranges of color and patterns camouflaging them from predators

    They blend with their natural surroundings
    Unnoticed until
    Underneath the canopy
    A disturbance catches the eye
    The undetected creature not only exposes himself
    But an entire flock of others

    Submitted on 2015-12-19 10:14:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Aren’t we all just part of a flock, trying to fit in, in a world we are forced upon. We all try to be noticed, try to stand out, and in doing so just make us more camouflaged. But this is not the nature of all, and not all has good intentions. The betrayal of some can break the harmony of the flock and drive us apart.

    I liked it :)
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