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    dots Submission Name: Imaginingdots
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    Author: expiring_touch
    ASL Info:    26/f/Hamburg
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 136/243/156
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsImaginingdots
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    How funny, though I’ve never had you, and I was never yours,
    that if you were to be gone, irreversibly, in your place
    would be a gaping hole, smoking and raw,
    as if from a gunshot.
    --- Your hand roams over my back, and I will
    give you a friendly nudge, --- a zealous accountant,
    I’ll count these to the decimal.
    My solar plexus runs amok again,
    I am not quite sure why, or why
    I am imagining
    .





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      you know, I imagined him before he finally found me and/or I found him. of this I am sure. I swear I talked, felt, listened and touched him before we ever met. or met again. seems I waited lifetimes.

    anyway, I enjoyed this. for the words, thoughts, reminders and a feeling of understanding.

    thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2016-01-05 00:00:00 | by isabella | [ Reply to This ]
      When ordinary lovers
    Don't feel what you feel
    And real-life situations lose their thrill
    Imagination's unreal
    Imaginary lover, imaginary lover
    You're mine anytime

    "Imaginary Lover"
    Atlanta Rhythm Section

    Although your post is much more nuanced than this pop tune, it did remind me of this song from the 70s.
    | Posted on 2015-12-22 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      Feels good... don't stop. Have a Great Christmas.

    Lloyd
    | Posted on 2015-12-20 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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