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    dots Submission Name: something to look forward todots
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    Author: CrypticBard
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    get in and get out
    of bed: morning, night,
    in and out --- again
    breath in, breath out
    all day long --- strong


          until (we remember)

    reminders to self; whether
    winter must be so much colder
    for those with no warm memories,
    and how, in our embraces we've
    already mimed awaited spring<i>




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    Submitted on 2015-12-20 07:07:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      All I can do is give you an answer.
    As one with few warm memories I can say that winter seems warmer than it appears to for most.

    With no summer to compare the weather we have nothing to expect but cold breezes and cold hearts.

    Thanks for the share

    | Posted on 2016-01-11 00:00:00 | by Localfreak | [ Reply to This ]
      Indeed. This is a good area to camp, a good example.

    When it is cold outside I have the hardest time crawling out of my warm bed. I have heard so many with the same complaint.

    This was a different perspective on that I really appreciated.

    Winter must be so much colder

    Chilling words

    Thank you for sharing
    | Posted on 2015-12-21 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]


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