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    dots Submission Name: politically corrected dots
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    Author: CrypticBard
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    dotspolitically corrected dots
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    political correction
    never rose a moon
    never set a sun
    nor cured cancer
    or facial enhancer
    bottomlines remain

    very little to gain, but

    a worn-out refrain
    may uncover truth
    somehow missed
    for lack of a chance
    to give this once over
    a secondary glance <i>




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    Submitted on 2015-12-21 21:34:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Couldn't have said t better myself. I could try but it'd most probably be full of four letter words and capslock
    | Posted on 2015-12-30 00:00:00 | by Localfreak | [ Reply to This ]
      Hmm..It does make one wonder the value of political correctness. How much God does ight foo or does it in truth hinder progress. No great discoveries were ever made by conformists.
    | Posted on 2015-12-22 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]


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