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    Author: Pollens
    Elite Ratio:    1.04 - 4/27/34
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 287
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       spanning several years


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                                                   it don't matter









































                                                 the computer
                                                 banged it out perfectly
                                                 ___
                                                 quickly erasing
                                                 what it wrote.
                                                 


























    Submitted on 2015-12-23 02:36:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Stop being so lubed up.
    | Posted on 2015-12-27 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      for the sake of perfection we erase
    our honesty as quickly as we create
    as the doodles in our margins soon become
    the galleries of a thwarted grace undone

    Just some thoughts on yours.
    | Posted on 2015-12-23 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      

    might as well av done nuffing.
    | Posted on 2015-12-23 00:00:00 | by Pollens | [ Reply to This ]


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