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    dots Submission Name: A wave coming over me dots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.15 - 51/165/170
    Words: 34
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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       I am a calcium deposit upon the ocean floor.



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    dotsA wave coming over me dots
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    Funny are the facts
    That create hearty laughs
    and lasting
    Moments
    that live forever
    in our hearts
    Embedded like shells
    on the floor of the ocean.




    Submitted on 2015-12-23 10:49:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      If you would and could only calm-up
    | Posted on 2015-12-27 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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