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    dots Submission Name: Nothing but the Bestdots
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    Author: SavedDragon
    Elite Ratio:    3.61 - 303/258/84
    Words: 228
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsNothing but the Bestdots
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    The memory was burned
    Into the fabric of my being
    His clear eyes were warm
    Like the Florida sun’s healing
    Year after year we could never get enough
    The thought of the past
    Filled with jovial dealings

    However, there came a time
    Where we went our separate ways
    But memories took over
    In mysterious ways
    To make the effort and see each other across
    States when we could, but it wasn’t the same

    We were connected by a bond
    That couldn’t be broken
    We soon drifted apart by words left unspoken
    Distance made our hearts grow fonder
    He was unique in his ways and dear to my heart
    A master piece like classical art
    But we were apart

    Glued together by the ideology of our perception
    Persuaded by looks and beauty’s deception
    Finally the truth came to surface
    When each of us realized our life’s purpose
    A forever love that couldn’t be shaken
    But distance was the fuel to the flame
    Our eternal love was to not be mistaken

    And now calm as things stay the same
    We dismiss our energies into the universe
    Wasted in this dimension except the memories we take
    In a parallel universe we can’t be cursed
    But for now, it’s, “I wish you nothing but the best”
    For each other’s sake




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