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    dots Submission Name: dots

    Author: Pollens
    Elite Ratio:    1.04 - 4/27/34
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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                        The days are full of things
                        i have not seen.

    cleaning cooling crisping
    carrying off

    the winds are full
    of structures


                                                      Awash on one of those great silences
                                                      [if i would just speak]

                                                      but, lo are
                                                      my wolf ways__


    Ere, if i had
    the instinct, i would
    kill that.

    Submitted on 2015-12-25 11:44:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Obvious you are nocturnal and need to make up.
    | Posted on 2015-12-27 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]

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