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    dots Submission Name: I kinda reekdots
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    Author: hyproglo
    Elite Ratio:    4 - 180/257/152
    Words: 182
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsI kinda reekdots
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    Why try and fill my pocket with your sh...

    Can't someone go about their day without becoming some faceless face that needs to revolve around you?

    Is your need to feel like the sun so great
    That you'll take the time to break into anyones
    and demand some sort of respect

    Abundant and pathetic wishes
    Save what you drain

    Entitled and demanding
    Wasting every grain

    Let me guess what you'll say next
    "Only I 'get' this pain"

    Shedding the same blood
    Crying the same tears
    Millions have done it over thousands of years

    But for some reason
    Today is the first day
    that this feeling
    this moment
    this situation
    has decided to knock

    And for some reason
    it decided to pick
    that one particular door
    you were behind.

    Aren't you special?

    If you haven't noticed
    everyones
    God given talent is to be shit upon.

    That's why we're all blessed.

    "I kinda reek of amazement don't I? Oh, you don't know? Let me show ya."






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      poor reek. he didn't deserve what he was dealt.
    | Posted on 2016-05-05 00:00:00 | by Chelebel | [ Reply to This ]


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