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I kinda reek
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I kinda reek
Why try and fill my pocket with your sh...
Can't someone go about their day without becoming some faceless face that needs to revolve around you?
Is your need to feel like the sun so great
That you'll take the time to break into anyones
and demand some sort of respect
Abundant and pathetic wishes
Save what you drain
Entitled and demanding
Wasting every grain
Let me guess what you'll say next
"Only I 'get' this pain"
Shedding the same blood
Crying the same tears
Millions have done it over thousands of years
But for some reason
Today is the first day
that this feeling
has decided to knock
And for some reason
it decided to pick
that one particular door
you were behind.
Aren't you special?
If you haven't noticed
God given talent is to be shit upon.
That's why we're all blessed.
"I kinda reek of amazement don't I? Oh, you don't know? Let me show ya."
Submitted on 2015-12-28 00:00:48
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poor reek. he didn't deserve what he was dealt.
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