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    Author: Pollens
    Elite Ratio:    1.04 - 4/27/34
    Words: 30
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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                                  incredibly




    like the bubble
              moving by water




                                                                you don't know me





    Submitted on 2015-12-29 04:02:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Dr. Who, I presume?
    | Posted on 2015-12-31 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      Great work.
    | Posted on 2015-12-30 00:00:00 | by Wolfwatching | [ Reply to This ]


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