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    dots Submission Name: life's a broadway musicaldots

    Author: CrypticBard
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 368/381/226
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    dotslife's a broadway musicaldots

    it's hard to hear yourself thinking
    when hate on hate is all around

    there's a cry for freedom ringing,
    its price, to keep another bound

    our goals require such liberties
    which defy our mental capacities

    we hope it's worth all the drama,
    our vengeful acts stripped of karma

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    Submitted on 2015-12-29 06:03:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I'd like the tune that goes with that but Yeah, what Monad said.

    | Posted on 2016-01-31 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      When is the price too high? Usually when the bill is due.

    just thoughts on this one.
    | Posted on 2016-01-07 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
      I relate to this better than almost anything of yours I've ever read. There are those who don't deserve whatever metaphysical prowess they have managed to assume. They affect others adversely and should be quelled. Yet how can we assume, what with our lack of existentially empirical metaphysical prowess that we can affect this assumed metaphysical prowess. Their vicarious recalcitrance's puissance is assumed from eons of anachronism. Greed and subordinating arrogance are almost undeniably a part of our social heritage. So do we deny the concept of karma and attempt to subordinate them to our vision of futurity. I say yes, of we have almost no other alternative to achieve our goals. Perhaps they will learn to live with we could learn to accept they too have a right to attempt to live free, as long as they learn to abandon their desire to unfairly exploit others.

    | Posted on 2015-12-30 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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