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    Author: Pollens
    Elite Ratio:    1.04 - 4/27/34
    Words: 201
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    What a mercy if the mountains
    grew up around this river
    and on either bank
    the long leaning limbs
    of the kauri






    entangled



















    nothing for several hundreds of feet,
    except for bellbird and fantail
    and morepork
    and tui.
















    Where i could forget, here
    & this current.




















    [With You ]










    Steadfastly, strenously.
    stupidly
    not being
    a current















































                                                                     somewhere up river.













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      You left which cell block cell your remains can be found up river.
    | Posted on 2015-12-31 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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