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    dots Submission Name: Daily 👣dots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/174
    Words: 153
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       Selfish is the only way when it comes to society and the way "it" operates. Society doesn't make heart decisions. How do we change this?


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    dotsDaily 👣dots
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    We wander about day by day
    Looking out for what?
    Always staring at eachother
    Wondering about their ways.

    Millions of us
    Running around
    Daily duties
    Pushing and tugging
    At our waists
    Wrists
    arms
    eyes

    Telling us yes to this
    And no to that
    Because you just
    Wait
    I'll be right back

    Selfish is our only way
    And greed controls
    And leads the way


    Paved
    Walkways



    For most to control
    The ones around
    And make them feel
    Like love compounds


    When really
    The only thing
    that surrounds


    Are demands of now
    And tell me how to think
    each thought and what blows
    my mind is aggressiveness abound
    Like it is the first time the only time
    My forgiveness allowed each and every time.









    Submitted on 2015-12-31 01:47:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      One trip to the grocery store can confirm this, you don't really even have to get out of the car, even traffic displays these characteristics. I hope this encourages those that read it to be kinder to others out and about.

    Though greed and selfishness are sincere motivators I see many who are simply stressed and worried. Not enough faith that things are going to be okay. We can do our best, do our share of chores but in the end as Jewel would say only kindness matters. What difference a routine would be if while we were out trying to fulfill our need for accomplishment we lent a little help to our fellow citizens.

    Let us all take your observations and be the difference.
    | Posted on 2016-01-11 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      We wander about day in and day out
    Looking out for what, the way out
    Always stocking on each-other
    To wonder about our ways.

    | Posted on 2015-12-31 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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