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    Author: Pollens
    Elite Ratio:    1.04 - 4/27/34
    Words: 409
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    there is tonnage
    upon tonnage of rock.
    above me:





































    the sun has fallen in
                                                                                to a crack of night     



































































    i have been writing these poems
    to make it seem as if
    that were not so


















































































































































































































































                                                           Winters give. Springs take hold.

















    Submitted on 2015-12-31 03:46:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Your Crack is in the Abyss, poem WTF.

    No paper trail, thank you for that.
    | Posted on 2015-12-31 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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