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    dots Submission Name: resolute anticipationdots

    Author: CrypticBard
    Elite Ratio:    3.55 - 368/381/225
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsresolute anticipationdots

    you can hear the flipping
    of calendar pages, and the
    clink of champagne glasses
    the roar of flashing fireworks
    and rustling of fabric under
    randomly launched hugs&kisses
    what old acquaintance is there
    where forgotten woes blend
    into hopes of a soul resolved


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      You captured the new years coming perfectly in this. It's highly visual, but you end with thoughtful thoughts. Why write fifteen lines if you can say it in ten or less? (That was a kick at myself because my work has become long and perhaps not focused) This does have focus. It feels fine-tuned where every word calls and image or a specific thought.
    | Posted on 2016-01-07 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]

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