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    dots Submission Name: 6:36 somewheredots

    Author: hyproglo
    Elite Ratio:    4 - 180/257/152
    Words: 296
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dots6:36 somewheredots

    Where was the next instance of a tombstone moment

    The sunlight or the shadows

    How can all that exists not lie in some shadow of some moment?

    The bones of bad luck never wait for a chorus

    Nor do the charms of a pillow

    If you always want to be the outcast
    Will you ever have time for yourself?

    Let us listen to your echos
    In a well

    Was there never enough time to find everything

    The streets can be long but the wind is always perfect


    Will it come again?
    Will it to come again.

    There it shall be

    No, this land is not confused
    It's infused
    with a march that will never be defeated

    Smile differently today than yesterday

    Touch will always be the same

    It's the only way to keep them from falling to pieces

    Even though it's one and the same

    God has never left
    But goddess always...

    Juggles between imperfections and time
    Concentrates on any other moment
    Pretends everything is fine

    Always asking 'why'

    Logic and reason
    a Saturday morning cartoon

    Dread and grievance...

    No need to react

    Melt in your irons and choke on your blood
    Sleep in the dust and pray for your moments of lust

    One of many small upsetters to the world.
    Pity yourself and crawl towards insignificance

    Admire every sunset
    Every shadow of light
    Breathe and rise

    Leave crumbs behind that will be too large for any appetite

    There'll be no doubt it is
    What it was meant to be

    Every scent and every decibel.

    Will be like six thirty six somewhere...

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