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Where was the next instance of a tombstone moment
The sunlight or the shadows
How can all that exists not lie in some shadow of some moment?
The bones of bad luck never wait for a chorus
Nor do the charms of a pillow
If you always want to be the outcast
Will you ever have time for yourself?
Let us listen to your echos
In a well
Was there never enough time to find everything
The streets can be long but the wind is always perfect
Will it come again?
Will it to come again.
There it shall be
No, this land is not confused
with a march that will never be defeated
Smile differently today than yesterday
Touch will always be the same
It's the only way to keep them from falling to pieces
Even though it's one and the same
God has never left
But goddess always...
Juggles between imperfections and time
Concentrates on any other moment
Pretends everything is fine
Always asking 'why'
Logic and reason
a Saturday morning cartoon
Dread and grievance...
No need to react
Melt in your irons and choke on your blood
Sleep in the dust and pray for your moments of lust
One of many small upsetters to the world.
Pity yourself and crawl towards insignificance
Admire every sunset
Every shadow of light
Breathe and rise
Leave crumbs behind that will be too large for any appetite
There'll be no doubt it is
What it was meant to be
Every scent and every decibel.
Will be like six thirty six somewhere...
Submitted on 2016-01-02 00:17:37
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