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    dots Submission Name: reflective devicesdots

    Author: CrypticBard
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 368/381/226
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsreflective devicesdots

    internet interests
    laundry hanging on the web
    lines sweet as honey

    ludicrous statements
    without hindsight's benefit
    fish out of water

    others, reflective mirror
    monkey copies you

    amused by postings;
    remind me one boring day
    to write on the sand


    Submitted on 2016-01-03 08:27:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This feels tongue-in-cheek. Sarcastic and sassy, like a comedian's dialogue that is really a commentary on humanity thinly veiled by humor. Some of your turns of phrase are interesting; "selfie important" kind of gave me a chuckle. But yes it is a sad condition of the world we collectively find ourselves in. Mindless frittering from one post to another, one subject to another. It is a whole lot of breadth without any depth. And you're right. It's a wonder more people aren't totally bored with it.
    | Posted on 2016-01-22 00:00:00 | by BlankSheet | [ Reply to This ]

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