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    dots Submission Name: unfinished thoughtsdots

    Author: CrypticBard
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    dotsunfinished thoughtsdots

    here in this venue, we bury each day,
    a time capsule of words and thought
    hoping to one day arrive at a Eureka
    of sorts; there tying-up neatly, each
    unfinished business that tomorrow
    bought from yesterday's backroom


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      We bury each day

    I like that. I think this is fitting for this time of year, I enjoy your words, reflections, always in tune with the many voices of our hearts and minds.

    Thank you for sharing, once again.
    | Posted on 2016-01-10 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      And perhaps, at some future date,
    we will look back at the pages
    and see not words, but packages
    wrapped neatly complete with bows
    a gift to ourselves that will be
    from the self we are now.

    Just my thoughts on yours! Happy New year, Ricky.
    | Posted on 2016-01-07 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]

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