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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    One member plus another member equals two
    Unless, it equals one
    In which the first and second separate members become one and the same
    This happens with making a child
    The egg plus the sperm become an embryo
    So if the equation one plus one equals two, rather one, what other exceptions are there to be had?
    I find in my life
    Infinite mystery
    I find written in the fabric of existence
    Words that are life and power, a force of being rather than an object
    In the clay, created, bones and skin and organs
    Preserved
    A word
    Just how this was spoken or written or observed
    Is another equation I would like to solve




    Submitted on 2016-01-05 10:38:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Nice ideas here, personally I'd though that one plus one would make three, if two joined to one where would the baby come out?
    I always loved the concept of looking at life in a different way, through a skewed perspective as they say, Strangely enough though near the end of this piece I'm sensing a little Christian perception. Starting with the word, life being given to clay, clay turned to bones....
    Go solve that bible it's full of these questions
    | Posted on 2016-01-11 00:00:00 | by Localfreak | [ Reply to This ]
      LOL...well don't go pulling out the math equations that make no sense in the real world or I'll have to pull out the magic of chemistry...lol. Synergy is pretty much the same, but you equal more than the sum of the parts. But that's what we hope for our children too--that they will be more than just the sum of us.

    Thanks for the thoughts and the mind boggle Jaz!
    | Posted on 2016-01-07 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]


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