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    dots Submission Name: Interstatedots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.07 - 48/165/170
    Words: 144
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsInterstatedots
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    Somewhere on this interstate of life
    The road lines blurred
    the memories conferred
    With the darkness of the night
    the streaming lights.
    The mind realized
    all the crossed lines
    reflectors collide
    with the tread that guides
    toward the northern light

    We don't have to go anywhere
    Baby we are fine right here
    Look into my soul
    make me laugh
    The whole night through

    I'm already going home
    Let's go kiss the sun down
    Out on the lonely road

    My mind it spins round
    Like the wheels I've found
    The ones I've learned to go to
    My back up plan
    my first instinct
    Roam
    My escape route
    my subconscious
    Screams out load
    for compassionate
    Roads ahead.












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      This reminds me of a night with a girl in which we got drunk and smoked a lot of...stuff. And when the stuff ran out I drove two hours down the interstate to get some more...and had to hang out with the guy who had more stuff for two hours and pretend I liked the lifestyle he lived all the while wondering if I would have rims and tires on my vehicle when I returned to it. Then got out of there and drove two hours home and was asked what took so long. ha! Good times good times!

    | Posted on 2016-01-19 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]


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