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    dots Submission Name: Once dots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.07 - 48/165/170
    Words: 132
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Only me can perceive what you are trying to tell me.
    Are you telling me you have pictures of me uncovered
    As naked as discovered as I will ever be? you have already
    Read my diary. So this is no surprise to me; nothing scared
    Nothing left to be revealed, discovered, or uncovered. Nothing
    Left to the magic nation or to fairy's to tell their tales of ancients.

    Flutterby's and passerby's have little time for stopping.
    But fairytales unlock the tales of long lost been forgotten.
    So we should stop and try to unlock the scared stories eschewed.

    (No God bless you.)

    For our lives are full of stolen treasures from lands long long ago.













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    | Posted on 2016-01-09 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      " try to unlock the scared stories eschewed.

    (No God bless you.)"

    Not going to lie, that made me laugh. I'm not sure how I feel about the structure, the way it's written feels like it should be broken up differently, but I'm partial to line breaks so that might be just me.

    I'm curious why you said "Only /me/ can perceive" rather than 'I'
    | Posted on 2016-01-07 00:00:00 | by PryncessVynom | [ Reply to This ]


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