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    dots Submission Name: My Partner dots

    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsMy Partner dots

    At the end of the day I stand at the forefront of battle for you,
    And I
    Then when the sun rises on our victory we celebrate in each others arms
    Intimately embraced to sheild ourselves from whatever weather we will weather
    We stand holding out our swords
    I with my sharp blade
    Tested against the fire
    And you with your arms
    A certain killer to any who would threaten our family
    I always feel safe
    Yes I am always safe
    And the war carries on and we are the best of soldiers
    And the battles ugly heads rise
    You and I just the best of lovers
    Winning this thing with stealth and speed

    Submitted on 2016-01-10 14:48:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      can't relate but am jealous.

    change sheild to shield. I will contemplate peice versus piece.
    | Posted on 2016-01-15 00:00:00 | by stellartotem | [ Reply to This ]
      Positively killer my friend. Reminds me of the words to a song I love "You and me against the world."

    | Posted on 2016-01-11 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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